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Sunday, September 12, 2010

Psalm23.1 [#twitterfoundpoem, September 12, 2010]

Psalm23.1 [#twitterfoundpoem, September 12, 2010]
Tweets+Edits=#twitterfoundpoem

i finish like clockwork with constant improvement
and hold you accountable. All of us finish
by whipping out angelic wings and the legends
of Yin and Yang Quantum: another obsession.

its finally peaceful n quiet. my sensor
is off and my New electronic skin gives me
those senses of touch and of Cruelty. i'm sorry.
my sensor was off and I shouldn't encourage

another obsession. if robots MUST feel, Then
We hold you accountable. All of us pray for
a finish like clockwork with constant improvement
that gasses you sheep like a gaseous shepherd.



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1 comment:

Travis King said...

I really enjoyed this one, Khakjaan. Good job working a consistent meter into a found poem and weaving together tweets with seamless fluidity. The imagery and the layering of meaning are both well conceived and well executed. I gave you a 5/5 on this one.