Thursday, April 08, 2010

Explosive Monochrome [News Poem, April 8, 2010]

Explosive Monochrome [News Poem, April 8, 2010]
“We had a guy shooting... and now he's behind the building.”
“Uh, negative, he was, uh, right in front of the brad. Uh, 'bout there... one o'clock. Haven't seen anything since then.”
“Just fuck it. Once you get on 'em just open 'em up.” [4:34 LISTEN, transcription's wrong]
“I see your element, uh, got about four Humvees, uh, out along this uh—”
“You're clear.”
“All right. Firing.”
“Let me know when you get them.”
“Let's shoot.”
“Light 'em all up.”
“Come on. Fire!”
4:22-4:51
“Well it's their fault for bringing their kids to a battle.”
“That's right.”
15:29-15:33

http://www.collateralmurder.com/
http://wikileaks.org

With monochrome eyeballs the whirlybird watches
And likewise we're fixed on the ignorant target;
And both of us think of the black and white movies—
Those cellulose nitrates, those obsolete pictures
Of characters featuring colorless faces,
Of subjects long dead and the lingering stigma
Of monochrome colors in digitized footage:
The murder, it plays out like X-Box Three Sixty.

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10 comments:

  1. Call of Duty 4 is a commercial for war
    Playing on televisions of the poor
    Doing more than recruiters in stripmalls
    Could with Phd scholarship promise-alls

    Billy plays the game in place of school
    It is the only place he has potential to rule
    All day long he is pwning noobs
    Only taking breaks to masturbate on youtube

    Billy gets war wedged in his head
    And dreams of combat while in bed
    Waking to make a life ending decision
    To be an Apache gunner with precision

    He ends up in Iraq, flying through the air
    Still staring at a screen but with less glare
    Because the image is in black and white
    Making it easy for Billy to pull the trigger tight

    From long distances and with high velocity
    Billy sends slugs competantly
    They pass through their targets and rip them apart
    Draining enough blood to stop the heart

    While miles and timezones away
    Average people go about their average day
    But some people are online watching footage of war
    Getting mad as hell, and not going to take it anymore

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  2. Good job dude. Thanks for the impromptu composition.

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  4. NEXT COMMENT IS 'FINAL' VERSION PLEASE DISCARD LAST COMMENT AS WELL AS THIS ONE

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  5. Response to Wikileaks 'Collateral Murder'

    recently men and now women (experience)
    uniform strength (dis)
    service (sat) and those fronting as (is) such
    not yet quite but almost no really
    perhaps
    or
    itchingly (faction)
    ready
    trained to be eager (no questions)
    playing
    (have five to six individuals with AK-47s)
    video
    (request permission to engage)
    games
    roger that you are free to engage
    joystick (quick) button (dead)
    is it
    is it
    is it
    easy and effortless as ever it was to
    (find out that now)
    nice shootin' (now its real) thank you
    (over)

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  6. Oops, sorry about that. Didn't see your request 'till after. Just hit publish. I think it's more interesting to see the draft process anyhow.

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  7. um, there's nothing i can do to prevent you (other than futile under-the-breath sounds) but uh, could you please remove the first, misshapen, deformed one? i would rather it weren't the first version seen...

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  8. Needed to show everybody that I didn't censor of my own accord. Have a problem w/ that, except in extreme circumstances.

    Thanks for posting/reading.

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  9. Eh, I'm not very interested in knee-jerk reactions to dissemblers. Plays into the whole false consciousness of dualism (duelism). I write news poems to defeat this false binary.

    It's like chess. Attack the strong point and you waste your time (and material). The whole problem has to do with the way people are _thinking_ about the news. Knee-jerk obedience and knee-jerk reaction. Did you ever consider that they peddle outrage after outrage to keep people blind to the strategic picture?

    They build a narrative. The counter-narrative is bullshit (give peace a chance) and the narrative itself is obvious bullshit. Both fail. To defeat this shit, one must understand how they construct the narrative.

    In a Coke v Pepsi world, I drink coffee knowing full well that that means someone works on a plantation for lousy wages. The more attention you give to Fox, the more powerful they become. Attack their lies at the root. That means getting hit w/ 'friendly fire' once in a while (or in my case, all the time).

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