tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post7654528039441108592..comments2023-11-07T20:58:27.784-08:00Comments on Toylit: Lies In The Firmament [Today's News Poem, March 8, 2011]Khakjaan Wessingtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05501187261486087495noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-38452264267455592672011-03-15T18:17:10.592-07:002011-03-15T18:17:10.592-07:00Brilliant poem. Thanks to Mark for point it out; ...Brilliant poem. Thanks to Mark for point it out; even more thanks to you for coming up with it.Susan Scheid (Raining Acorns)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02827286681242730183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-50295321669621717252011-03-10T14:11:18.487-08:002011-03-10T14:11:18.487-08:00"I heard the owl" but couldn't see h..."I heard the owl" but couldn't see her, not even by the "sparkling" light of the church - I really like that. This is a very strong one.Mark Kerstetterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13307987573435067415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-45272915580112727222011-03-08T14:12:44.855-08:002011-03-08T14:12:44.855-08:00Oh man! Khakjaan, this was far superior to the stu...Oh man! Khakjaan, this was far superior to the stuff I've read by other poets. I'm blown away by each line and way you worked your metaphors. I'm kind of at a loss for words. I find this poem extraordinary. I love this quality of poetic craftsmanship. I'll leave it at that my friend.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.com