tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post2707873644543832819..comments2023-11-07T20:58:27.784-08:00Comments on Toylit: Guest Contributor: "Poker Face" By Rutherford Toady (aka rtoady)Khakjaan Wessingtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05501187261486087495noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-17770545973809400462010-03-28T09:25:01.853-07:002010-03-28T09:25:01.853-07:00Very refreshing, Toady! Only one flow suggestion: ...Very refreshing, Toady! Only one flow suggestion: in the para about Horkheimer, 'sense of humor that had a real sense of bitterness behind it' - maybe try 'edge of bitterness' to avoid the repetition. Or not. As is, this is a gem.osonegronoreply@blogger.com