tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post1700669971642969017..comments2023-11-07T20:58:27.784-08:00Comments on Toylit: Addressing Future Folk-Demons [Today's News Poem, January 11, 2011]Khakjaan Wessingtonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05501187261486087495noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-8030682550325738752011-01-13T21:39:55.221-08:002011-01-13T21:39:55.221-08:00Cudos... wonderful use of irony here.Cudos... wonderful use of irony here.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-18662781824228443252011-01-12T18:46:29.591-08:002011-01-12T18:46:29.591-08:00I enjoyed reading this one... thanks for sharing.....I enjoyed reading this one... thanks for sharing...<br /><br /><br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah Shivaya<br />http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com<br />Twitter @VerseEveryDayShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-65406003595878994012011-01-12T11:37:25.758-08:002011-01-12T11:37:25.758-08:00read your comment at one stop for suggestions what...read your comment at one stop for suggestions what to read - think you will love this one. would be interesting what you think about this - know your standards are high<br /><br />http://poemsfromthemiddle.blogspot.com/2011/01/aint-nothin-but-poet.htmlClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-54136480498144072422011-01-12T07:52:31.640-08:002011-01-12T07:52:31.640-08:00A strong, bitter reality-poem.
I had to read this...A strong, bitter reality-poem.<br /><br />I had to read this twice...it haunts with so many messages.<br /><br />Kudos.<br /><br />Lady NyoAsobimehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15661326504398833746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-60265306579249382552011-01-12T04:10:21.239-08:002011-01-12T04:10:21.239-08:00the quotes at the end sat really well with this po...the quotes at the end sat really well with this poem...some really good strong lines here...but the overall poem flowed well. liked this one mate..cheers peteMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-43766416486955107562011-01-12T02:08:33.751-08:002011-01-12T02:08:33.751-08:00I join Claudia, you got me at "be careful wit...I join Claudia, you got me at "be careful with dreams"..poignant piece!Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-2374732656138886022011-01-11T22:32:12.888-08:002011-01-11T22:32:12.888-08:00Liked this line, "Die by the minute, get paid...Liked this line, "Die by the minute, get paid by the hour" -- you don't mince words here, a powerful write.*https://www.blogger.com/profile/06484208765656281917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-36623576843764378352011-01-11T15:54:21.597-08:002011-01-11T15:54:21.597-08:00Really dig the flow of thisReally dig the flow of thisAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-30232395975581140422011-01-11T15:11:23.789-08:002011-01-11T15:11:23.789-08:00you cracked the whip tonight..some brilliant lines...you cracked the whip tonight..some brilliant lines in there...those first couple grab you and dont let go...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-40684808630088195392011-01-11T14:31:05.319-08:002011-01-11T14:31:05.319-08:00you had my attention with the first three words - ...you had my attention with the first three words - careful with dreams - very strong write khas<br />with powerful, well arranged linesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-92044510956556242012011-01-11T14:16:26.431-08:002011-01-11T14:16:26.431-08:00Oh great lines here...strong. Media and society in...Oh great lines here...strong. Media and society in general tend to take the stance that children drive the buying industry...and innocence lost is a lament. Brilliant irony play, clear references.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8692984.post-34804679450239833582011-01-11T14:12:17.553-08:002011-01-11T14:12:17.553-08:00Societal messages which are sent, particularly to ...Societal messages which are sent, particularly to children upon greater examination often prove arbitrary, while built further upon an inner surplus of baseless expectations. Like the clear pauses in most lines— Creates a succinct tone and emphasis.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.com